Today I was doing a recount and I learnt how to use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence. I was working on punctuating my work and making sure that my sentences make sense. Check it out..
Hi Levi, Well done. You have done a great job with your sentences. Now that you have mastered the fullstops and capitals think about how the sentence reads. Try not to have so many and's in a sentence (sometimes a fullstop will do) and if you haven't finished your throught try putting in a "," instead of a fullstop. Good to see you posting .
Perfect recount of what your family was up to on the weekend. It was super cool that you took some snacks with you for the long wait. I really like the way that you are using capital letters and full stops. Your story has been well written and it makes sense. Try and put some more adjectives in your writing to make it more interesting. Keep up the writing and before you know it you will be writing long stories. Thanks for sharing.
I really like your recount, it is well written and each sentence has a capital letter and full stop. Well done! I also got a covid test done. It's good that you brought snacks and your sisters chromebook to keep you entertained while you were waiting. Looking forward to more blog posts!
Kia ora Levi Well done with your capital letters and full stops. What a long wait for a covid test. Perhaps you could give us a bit more information like where was the test and why your brother had to have one? I am glad it tickled. I hope his results came back negative. Looking forward to your next blog perhaps you can tell us what happened? Keep up the great work Levi.
I noticed you included an Introduction as to what your writing was about. I liked the title of your story. I see that you met your goal by including full stops and capital letters. I wonder if you could extend your sentences by including some descriptive words to describe how you felt and what you saw.
Keep up with your writing Levi. I look forward to reading your next blog.
Kia Ora Levi My name is Daiki from Waikowhai Primary School Well done on learning how to use capital and punctuation. Maybe you could go into the slide show and change the settings it anyone with the link because I need access for the slide show.
Hey Levi Nice blog Levi.I like your blog because it was interesting because your brother went to test if he had covid.Now it seems interesting to me because I did not know that they put something up your nose and by the way nice blog and I can't wait to play rugby again at school with you Spencer,Viliami,Antonio and me.
Hi Levi,
ReplyDeleteWell done. You have done a great job with your sentences. Now that you have mastered the fullstops and capitals think about how the sentence reads. Try not to have so many and's in a sentence (sometimes a fullstop will do) and if you haven't finished your throught try putting in a "," instead of a fullstop. Good to see you posting .
Perfect recount of what your family was up to on the weekend. It was super cool that you took some snacks with you for the long wait. I really like the way that you are using capital letters and full stops. Your story has been well written and it makes sense. Try and put some more adjectives in your writing to make it more interesting. Keep up the writing and before you know it you will be writing long stories. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHey Levi
ReplyDeleteYou did well with your capitals! Every sentence had one.. I liked that you wrote in your introduction what your learning goal was too!
Did you have to get a test as well or just your brother? That was a real long wait. Lucky you took snacks!
Can’t wait to read your next blog!
Kia ora Levi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your recount, it is well written and each sentence has a capital letter and full stop. Well done! I also got a covid test done. It's good that you brought snacks and your sisters chromebook to keep you entertained while you were waiting. Looking forward to more blog posts!
Kia ora Levi
ReplyDeleteWell done with your capital letters and full stops. What a long wait for a covid test. Perhaps you could give us a bit more information like where was the test and why your brother had to have one? I am glad it tickled. I hope his results came back negative. Looking forward to your next blog perhaps you can tell us what happened? Keep up the great work Levi.
FROM MRS A @ NEW WINDSOR SCHOOL
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Levi
I noticed you included an Introduction as to what your writing was about. I liked the title of your story. I see that you met your goal by including full stops and capital letters. I wonder if you could extend your sentences by including some descriptive words to describe how you felt and what you saw.
Keep up with your writing Levi. I look forward to reading your next blog.
From Mrs A
Kia Ora Levi
ReplyDeleteMy name is Daiki from Waikowhai Primary School
Well done on learning how to use capital and punctuation.
Maybe you could go into the slide show and change the settings it anyone with the link because I need access for the slide show.
Hey Levi
ReplyDeleteNice blog Levi.I like your blog because it was interesting because your brother went to test if he had covid.Now it seems interesting to me because I did not know that they put something up your nose and by the way nice blog and I can't wait to play rugby again at school with you Spencer,Viliami,Antonio and me.